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Literature Text
It is a cold evening;
My breath paints a picture
Of death dressed in white.
I enjoy the company.
My feet ache for home
My heart wonders why-
They journeyed so far.
The mist seems to blend -
My tones into the sky.
I become invisible
Under the cover of the world.
It has been a long way home
And nothing shelters me
Except moonlight and frost coverings.
Nestled in my heart there is a pearl-
Of sorrow.
It is encompassed and entwined by love;
Suffocated by gay and wondrous dreams.
The decay of leaves and flower petals
Echo an illusion of breaking waves –
I am sure a path was here.
My feet pad quickly homeward.
I am bound tightly in the knowledge-
I have reaped.
Cherishing faint and golden impressions;
I start to wonder why I ever hesitated to dream.
My breath paints a picture
Of death dressed in white.
I enjoy the company.
My feet ache for home
My heart wonders why-
They journeyed so far.
The mist seems to blend -
My tones into the sky.
I become invisible
Under the cover of the world.
It has been a long way home
And nothing shelters me
Except moonlight and frost coverings.
Nestled in my heart there is a pearl-
Of sorrow.
It is encompassed and entwined by love;
Suffocated by gay and wondrous dreams.
The decay of leaves and flower petals
Echo an illusion of breaking waves –
I am sure a path was here.
My feet pad quickly homeward.
I am bound tightly in the knowledge-
I have reaped.
Cherishing faint and golden impressions;
I start to wonder why I ever hesitated to dream.
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Your imagery and sensory descriptions meld into interpretable metaphors quite well and id even say in a fairly unique manner. I really love the whimsicality of it and how that fact doesn't take away from its possible depth. Then after reading it and hearing the concluding line lol i can only feel challenged to dream as you have. neat and inspiring. you might smooth the wording out a bit and maybe cause the rhyming element to happen more consistently but aside from that this is excellent work!